Nance v. Random House, Inc.

212 F. Supp. 2d 268, 2002 U.S. Dist. LEXIS 14002, 2002 WL 1766435
CourtDistrict Court, S.D. New York
DecidedJuly 30, 2002
Docket00 Civ. 8639(SHS)
StatusPublished
Cited by2 cases

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Opinion

OPINION

STEIN, District Judge.

John J. Nance, a successful author of action novels, brings this breach of contract action against Bantam Doubleday Dell Publishing Group (“Doubleday”) 1 and *270 St. Martin’s Press, Inc. Jurisdiction exists in this Court because the controversy is between citizens of different states. See 28 U.S.C. § 1382. Nance alleges that defendants rejected his manuscript for a work of fiction in bad faith and fraudulently induced him to write an additional draft of the work that they never intended to publish. The publishers have moved for summary judgment dismissing the complaint and granting them summary judgment on their counterclaim for the return of the advances they paid to Nance prior to terminating his contract. Since the parties’ contract required that Nance’s manuscript be satisfactory to the publishers and Nance has failed to come forward with any issues of material fact that would establish that the publishers rejected the manuscript in bad faith, both of defendants’ motions are granted.

I. BACKGROUND

Nance is a commercial air pilot and author of eight novels, all of which are aviation-based thrillers. Prior to entering into the contract at issue in this action, Doubleday published the hardcover edition, and St. Martin’s published the paperback edition, of Nance’s novels Pandora’s Clock — a New York Times bestseller — and Medusa’s Child. In February 1997, Nance signed a contract (the “Contract”) with Doubleday and St. Martin’s for the publication of three additional novels over a three-year period. (Compl. ¶ 9; Coyne Aff. ¶ 3, Ex. 1.) The Contract stated that Nance would receive $1 million per book, with payments to be made first, upon signing the Contract; second, upon the completion of specified outlines and manuscripts “complete and satisfactory to [the] Publisher;” and third, upon publication of each novel. (Coyne Aff., Ex. 1, cl. 3, 7.) With respect to the editorial process, the Contract provided that the parties would agree on a schedule for revising submitted work, but that “[s]hould Publisher conclude that the Work or any portion thereof as first submitted cannot be revised to its satisfaction within a timely period or should Publisher find the revised Work or any portion thereof unacceptable for any reason, Publisher may reject it.” (Jd., cl. 3(b).)

The first novel foreseen in the three-book Contract, The Last Hostage, was published in the spring of 1998. (Compl.f 13.) Nance’s literary agent Olga Wieser submitted an outline for the second work, entitled Blackout, on January 6, 1998. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 12, Ex. 2; Nance Dep. (I) at 77-78.) As described in the outline, Blackout’s plot involved a commercial air flight whose pilot is blinded by a mysterious laser and forced to land the plane with the help of his terrified passengers. Shawn Coyne, a Senior Editor at Doubleday who had worked with Nance on The Last Hostage, sent Wieser comments the following day. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 12, Ex. 3; Nance Dep. (I) at 79-80). Nance sent a revised outline to Coyne and Matthew Shear, then Vice President and Publisher for St. Martin’s, and subsequently met with Shear and Joseph Veltre, then an Assistant Editor at St. Martin’s, to discuss the outline. (Coyne Aff. ¶¶ 13, 15, Ex. 4; Shear Dep. at 173; Veltre Dep. at 12-13; Nance Dep. (I) at 98.) In February, Nance submitted another revised outline, which the publishers accepted the following month and sent Nance an advance payment of $150,000 pursuant to the Contract. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 16, Ex. 7; Nance Dep. (I) at 101-02, 228.)

Nance then drafted a manuscript based on the approved outline and sent Coyne the first 17 chapters of Blackout in April. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 17, Ex. 9; Nance Dep. (I) at 119-120.) Coyne responded in writing that the manuscript was “coming along nicely” and shared some of his concerns with the submission, such as the need to *271 increase suspense by withholding certain plot details until later in the work. (Coyne Aff., Ex. 10.) Nance submitted the rest of the draft of Blackout in July. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 18; Compl. ¶ 23.) Coyne subsequently wrote Nance that while the manuscript had “a lot of great things going,” some areas of the plot needed to be made more suspenseful or credible and that he intended to share the draft with the editors at St. Martin’s before sending a more formal response. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 18, Ex. 11.)

The resulting comments were largely unfavorable. In an eight-page, single-spaced letter dated September 2, 1998, Coyne, Shear, and Veltre described specific problems with the plot, characterization and pacing of the manuscript. (Coyne Aff. ¶¶ 20-24, Ex. 13; Nance Dep. (I) at 155-56.) Most fundamentally, the editors felt that the submitted draft of Blackout lacked the elements that had made Pandora’s Clock a bestseller — the combination of a “high concept plot,” i.e., a single theme unifying the book, with a “very personal story.” (Coyne Aff., Ex. 13 at 1-2.) While Pandora’s Clock kept readers “glued to the page” with its story of a deadly virus transported on a plane, Nance’s two subsequent novels — Medusa’s Child and The Last Hostage — lacked the same narrative drive and thus sold fewer copies. The draft of Blackout, they believed, became bogged down in “the inner workings of the various strata of the American political, intelligence, and justice systems.” (Id. at 2.) The editors invited Nance to provide them with a plan for revisions once he had identified “the missing big idea” that would appeal to his readers and “get [sales] back to the Pandora level.” (Id. at 2, 8.)

The following week, Nance submitted a revised outline with a new “high concept” — a nuclear bomb hidden at the base of the Hoover Dam, the instructions for disarming which are contained on a computer diskette passed to an unwitting passenger on a flight from Hong Kong to Los Angeles. (Coyne Aff. ¶¶ 25-27, Ex. 14.) The device of a pilot blinded by lasers was retained, but it was reduced it to a subsidiary element to the main nuclear bomb story. The editors were unimpressed by Nance’s changes and instead sent him their own suggested outline for Blackout. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 28, Ex. 15.) The letter also cautioned, “our acceptance of the [first Blackout ] outline did not imply that we would accept the first draft of Blackout, which we have decided not to do. And, should you choose to follow our suggested revised outline ... we’ll still have to evaluate this next draft and determine its acceptability.” In early November, Nance submitted another revised outline based on the editors’ suggestions. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 29, Ex. 16.) Shortly thereafter, Coyne informed Wieser that Nance should draft a manuscript based on the revised outline. (Coyne Aff. ¶ 29.)

Nance submitted part of the second draft of Blackout

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